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Evin Protector of Kingdoms Chapter:1 by Ask-Evin Evin Protector of Kingdoms Chapter:1 by Ask-Evin

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:iconmethusulacomics:
MethusulaComics Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
nice start, seems a little rushed and cliché but hopefully the character interactions will be awesome :)
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Ask-Evin Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks i hope so too :)
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:iconmethusulacomics:
MethusulaComics Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
if you want I could help out :) I myself do tend to struggle with writing but I have completed a few short stories and even done script style RP's with others. but its really your call.
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The-KingofFools Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very small grammatical errors aside (who am I to judge, I misspell things all the time), I think you did a good job depicting the world that they live in now. Also, it's very descriptive in its narrative style. I can't wait for more of these!
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Ask-Evin Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fuck really? DX man that what i get for being born on an island in the middle of the fucking atlantic! 
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The-KingofFools Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, it still made sense. And it was still really well written
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DarlingSpade Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good so far c:
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Ask-Evin Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks :) 
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